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上周日，你班開(kāi)展以“美化城市環(huán)境，倡導(dǎo)低碳生活”為宗旨的志愿者活動(dòng)�；顒�(dòng)內(nèi)容包括：上午去郊區(qū)植樹(shù)；下午去廣場(chǎng)宣傳，分發(fā)傳單。請(qǐng)你就這個(gè)活動(dòng)為校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇120個(gè)左右詞的短文。
你的文章應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：
活動(dòng)宗旨，內(nèi)容及其對(duì)同學(xué)的影響；
你的評(píng)論。
注意：1．文章的標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。
2．參考詞匯：低碳生活 a low-carbon lifestyle 傳單leaflet郊區(qū)suburb
A voluntary activity
Last Sunday, our class launched a voluntary activity.___________________________________

Answer 1

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A voluntary activity
Last Sunday, our class launched a voluntary activity. Its theme is to make the city more beautiful and advocate a low-carbon lifestyle. In the morning, we went to plant trees in the suburbs. We worked in cooperation. Some dug holes, some carried and planted trees, and some watered them. In the afternoon, we went to People’s Square to hand out leaflets, raising people’s awareness of environmental protection. Most of the students think highly of the activity, which will surely produce a positive effect on their daily life.
As far as I’m concerned, it’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. As long as there is the possibility of saving our planet, take action now before it is too late. Low carbon living is surely a way of great significance.（120詞）

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料具有鮮明的時(shí)代特色，學(xué)生很容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的。考生在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，上周日，你班開(kāi)展以“美化城市環(huán)境，倡導(dǎo)低碳生活”為宗旨的志愿者活動(dòng)�；顒�(dòng)內(nèi)容包括：上午去郊區(qū)植樹(shù)；下午去廣場(chǎng)宣傳，分發(fā)傳單。請(qǐng)你就這個(gè)活動(dòng)為校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇120個(gè)左右詞的短文。所以要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；人稱(chēng)應(yīng)該用第一人稱(chēng)we注意字?jǐn)?shù)的要求。同時(shí)還要注意不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如think highly of ，as far as I’m concerned，as long as，take action，還運(yùn)用了動(dòng)詞的不定式形式作表語(yǔ)，非謂語(yǔ)的-ing形式做狀語(yǔ)，which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等等。