Question

你的英語(yǔ)老師要求你班同學(xué)每天英語(yǔ)課上用英語(yǔ)為全班介紹一句英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)。假設(shè)你是李華，在明天的課上，你要為大家介紹time and tide wait for no man(時(shí)不我待)這句諺語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)按照以下要點(diǎn)，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
1. 你從一本中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)雜志上讀到的這句諺語(yǔ)；
2.你喜歡這句諺語(yǔ)的理由：文字簡(jiǎn)單，容易記憶，能夠激勵(lì)你抓緊時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)。
3.舉出兩種可能會(huì)用到這句諺語(yǔ)的語(yǔ)境。
注意：詞數(shù)100左右； 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：諺語(yǔ)proverb
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
      

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear class,
Today I’d like to share with you the proverb “Time and tide wait for no man.” I read it in an English magazine for middle school students. I like it very much for two reasons. First it is very easy to remember because all the words used are very simple. Second, this proverb always encourages me to make good use of my time to study. Next time, if you happen to meet someone who is easting too much time playing computer games, you can say to him,” Time and tide wait for no man. Go to study now!” Of course, you can also say it to yourself when you are feeling lazy and don’t want to do anything.
Thank you

試題分析: 本文是提綱作為。主要是要向全班同學(xué)介紹time and tide wait for no man(時(shí)不我待)這句諺語(yǔ)。面對(duì)同學(xué)介紹，應(yīng)該要有稱呼，如：Dear class,接著要說(shuō)出自己要介紹的諺語(yǔ)，包括自己在哪發(fā)現(xiàn)的，我為什么喜歡它，在什么情況下可以用它。最后，用Thank you來(lái)結(jié)束發(fā)言。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文非常符合口頭發(fā)言的習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔明了，很容易聽(tīng)懂。另外本文還用了一些很好的詞語(yǔ)，如：share with；make good use of為文章增色不少。