Question

最近在你班的班會上進行了一次有關是在國外讀大學還是在國內(nèi)讀大學的討論會，請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文短文為校報投稿。
要求：要點要全，可適當拓展。字數(shù)：120

在國外上大學	在國內(nèi)上大學
學校知名度高、注重實踐、環(huán)境優(yōu)雅	優(yōu)秀的教師團隊、設備先進、學費較低
費用高	實踐的機會不多
你的觀點或看法

Answer 1

Our class have held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently.
Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice. Because there are lots of famous colleges abroad. The environment there is nice and quiet. But the expense of studying abroad is rather high. Others prefer to study home. They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers, the teaching equipment is advanced, and the tuition is lower. However, chances of practising is not as many as studying abroad.
As far as I am concerned, I choose domestic colleges. Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university, culture difference is a big problem. To study abroad, you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits.

試題分析：本題是一篇材料類作文。作文要求以表格的形式呈現(xiàn)，清晰明了，容易構(gòu)思。可以大概分成三段，第一段總寫；第二段比較；第三段給出觀點。寫作過程中，注意時態(tài)和單復數(shù)的正確使用，多用一些連接詞或短語，使文章銜接緊密；可以使用定語從句、賓語從句等，以提高作文的等級。
【亮點說明】范文層次分明，為總-分-總結(jié)構(gòu)。首段總寫，使用的賓語從句whether...or...；第二段分正、反雙方，論述各自的利弊；最后一段總結(jié)自己的觀點。運用了很好的短語和語法。如As far as I am concerned, To study abroad等。