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要求：假設(shè)你是王林，作為一名交換生來到英國學(xué)習(xí)。經(jīng)過一周的學(xué)習(xí)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)一下提示將你的見聞通過e-mail告訴你的父母。
（1）學(xué)校：校園比在中國就讀的中學(xué)大3倍，綠樹環(huán)繞；擁有現(xiàn)代化體育館、藝術(shù)教室、實(shí)驗(yàn)室等。
（2）課程：選修的是物理、數(shù)學(xué)、化學(xué)和英語四門學(xué)科。
（3）老師：老師采用討論式教學(xué)。
（4）同學(xué)：班級(jí)20人。女生9人，男生11人。
注意：1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。                   2.100個(gè)詞左右
提示詞：laboratory（實(shí)驗(yàn)室）   gym(體育館)   method(方法)
Dear Mam and Dad，
How are you？
One week has passed. I'm very fine here. Everything interests me very much.                
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
 
In a word, I'm very happy to be with them.
Yours,
Wang Lin.

Answer 1

One Possible Version
Dear Mam and Dad，
How are you？
One week has passed. I'm very fine here. Everything interests me very much.
Everything here is very different. The middle school is three times than the school in China. There are lots of trees around the school. And our has modern gym、art classroom、laboratory and so on.
I had chosen Physics、Math、Biology and English to learn. They are difficult, but it can't stop me to love them. I will study hard. The teacher's teach method is also different. Teacher usually makes us discuss in class,and everyone is very active.
In a word, I'm very happy to be with them.
Yours,
Wang Lin.

試題分析：本文是一篇書信作文。寫作時(shí)首先要仔細(xì)審題，確定人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，文體。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要全面，上下段要使用連接詞做到連貫。我們?cè)趯懽髦袘?yīng)當(dāng)用盡可能少的形式表達(dá)盡可能多的語義內(nèi)容，力求簡(jiǎn)潔精練。根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，寫出所列要點(diǎn)，要全面。我們?cè)谟迷~上應(yīng)該仔細(xì)揣摩，準(zhǔn)確清晰地表達(dá)我們的思想，剔除冗詞贅語，使文章言簡(jiǎn)意賅。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如：he middle school is three times than the school in China. it can't stop me to love them等。還運(yùn)用了復(fù)合句They are difficult, but it can't stop me to love them.等。并注意了句子的銜接如：And，but，In a word等。
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