Question

據(jù)《中國(guó)青年報(bào)》報(bào)道，浙江省高中生從新學(xué)期開(kāi)始必須選修一門新課程，如修馬桶、做凳子、換燈泡等日常生活實(shí)用技術(shù)。對(duì)此，絕大多數(shù)人認(rèn)為很有必要，但也有人持懷疑態(tài)度。現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇120詞左右的短文，簡(jiǎn)要介紹該相關(guān)報(bào)道和雙方觀點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶�。下表是雙方的主要觀點(diǎn)： 

大多數(shù)人贊成	一些人反對(duì)
學(xué)生可以學(xué)到生活基本技能； 享受勞動(dòng)樂(lè)趣和成功的喜悅； 激發(fā)學(xué)生的作創(chuàng)造力。	會(huì)增加學(xué)生的負(fù)擔(dān)

注意：1. 不必逐條翻譯，可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 參考詞匯：凳子 stool

Answer 1

It is reported in China Youth Daily that senior students in Zhejiang province must take a new course from this new term on, in which they will learn some practical skills, such as fixing toilets, making stools and changing light bulbs. The opinions are divided.
Most people think it is necessary to have such a course. They believe that students can not only learn some basic living skills but also enjoy the pleasure of labor and the happiness of success. What’s more, it will help develop students’ creativity. On the other hand , some people oppose it. They think that this course will be a new burden to fall on students.
As far as I am concerned, students will benefit from such a practical course and they will get more knowledge in an interesting way.

試題分析：本篇寫作題材是對(duì)浙江省的一門新課程的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，有總述；贊同的觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；和自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力�？忌鷳�(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語(yǔ)及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，句式多變：It is reported in China Youth Daily that senior students in Zhejiang province must take a new course from this new term on, in which they will learn some practical skills, such as fixing toilets, making stools and changing light bulbs. 這句話是個(gè)長(zhǎng)句，包括it做形式主語(yǔ)，主語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句， Most people think it is necessary to have such a course.這句話也是用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， They believe that students can not only learn some basic living skills but also enjoy the pleasure of labor and the happiness of success.這句話用了not only…but also結(jié)構(gòu)， They think that this course will be a new burden to fall on students.這句話用了不定式做定語(yǔ)， 還有文章還使用了What’s more, On the other hand , As far as I am concerned這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。