Question

假如你是李華，是某學(xué)校高二的學(xué)生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下某西餐廳的招聘廣告，給負(fù)責(zé)招聘的Smith先生發(fā)一封email，介紹你的情況。

Par-time Waiter/Waitress wanted *Age: over 17 *Fluent English *Work experience Email,Hn5159 @ hotmail.com

注意
1. 詞數(shù)100左右短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2. 可以說明你的其他優(yōu)勢(shì)。
Dear Smith,
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Smith,
I’m writing to apply for the job. I’m a seventeen-year-old student of Senior High Two. As the summer vocation is drawing near, I hope to get more work experience by working during the vocation. I think I’m qualified for the job because I once worked part-time in a restaurant for two months. And I can speak English fluently, having won several prizes in English contests. Besides, I always get along well with others and I believe I will enjoy working in your restaurant. I’m sure I’m the suitable person for the position.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是篇應(yīng)聘應(yīng)用文，內(nèi)容提示較簡(jiǎn)潔，只是框架，但學(xué)生也容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，介紹自己的情況要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，自己的意志要用將來時(shí)態(tài)。其次還要注意寫應(yīng)聘書信的語言及語氣。給應(yīng)聘公司寫信要語氣委婉，用第一人稱。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如apply for, draw near, be qualified for, get along well with等， 還運(yùn)用了進(jìn)行時(shí)表將來，doing做狀語，looking forward to來結(jié)尾等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：besides等。