Question

你最好的朋友Jack最近迷上電腦，因此常常熬夜，疏忽課業(yè)，并受到父母的指責(zé)。你打算寫(xiě)一封信給他,適當(dāng)?shù)亟o予勸告。
注意：⒈ 詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；  
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫；
⒊ 答案必須寫(xiě)在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。
Dear Jack,
How have you been recently?______________________________________________________           __  
                                                                                         
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Sincerely Yours,
Jill

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
How have you been recently? I know that you have gotten so addicted to video games that you often stay up late and ignore your studies. As your best friend, I believe that I have the responsibility to give you some advice.
As you might have discovered, video games can have quite a few negative impacts on your life. First, lacking sleep, you may often nod off in class. Therefore, you may not be able to concentrate on what the teacher is saying. You may have found yourself falling behind and having a hard time catching up in your studies. In addition, it seems that you have become a mouse potato and forgotten the benefits of playing sports.
I really miss the happy times with you on the basketball court, and you do need some exercise. Please do not indulge yourself in video games anymore. How about meeting in the park this Sunday? I look forward to your reply!
Sincerely Yours,
Jill

試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)是要求學(xué)生寫(xiě)一封書(shū)信，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的�？忌�在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)。注意本文是一封勸告信，故多用第二人稱(chēng)。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如addict to，stay up late，have the responsibility to do，have negative impacts on, nod off.，concentrate on，catch up，look forward to還運(yùn)用句型so … that …引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)，it seems that …等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：first，therefore，in addition, 等等。