Question

進(jìn)入高三以來，同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力倍增。就此問題，最近你班開了一次以“壓力”為主題的班會(huì)。在班會(huì)上，大家各抒己見，就如何緩解壓力提出了自己的看法。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：
1、壓力的來源；
2、壓力與成敗的關(guān)系；
3、你自己是如何解決壓力的；
4、推薦一種你認(rèn)為行之有效的緩解壓力的方法。
注意：
1、詞數(shù)：120左右；
2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3、文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
4、文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。
We have recently held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon every one of us senior three students. _________________________________________________
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                  

Answer 1

We have recently held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon every one of us senior three students.
It is widely acknowledged that we are under great pressure, which seems to be on the increase .The main reasons are as follows .On the one hand ,we all worry about the coming College Entrance  Examination. On the other hand , we bear too much pressure from our parents’ high expectations.
Pressure has a positive influence and negative effect .A certain amount of stress may provide motivation and give us the purpose to life .So it is easier for us to succeed in the competition. However ,too much of it will make success highly impossible.
Since it is unlikely to avoid pressure in our life, we have to learn how to deal with it .There are some good ways to reduce stress ,such as traveling ,doing some exercise, listening to some relax music or sharing my feelings with my friends.
Of all the ways ,I think the most effective way is to share our happiness and sorrow with our friends ,which will help to make us feel better .I hope everyone can reduce too much stress in study and live a relaxing and happy life.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達(dá)這些要點(diǎn)以外，還要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文語言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：as follows如下，deal with處理，live a relaxing and happy life過著放松快樂的生活。范文中的句式多變，運(yùn)用不同的語法知識(shí)： It is widely acknowledged that we are under great pressure, which seems to be on the increase .這句話用了it做形式主語和非限制性定語從句， it is unlikely to avoid pressure in our life, we have to learn how to deal with it ，這句話用了it is unlikely to do sth的句型，Of all the ways ,I think the most effective way is to share our happiness and sorrow with our friends ,which will help to make us feel better .這句話也用了非限制性定語從句，還有范文使用On the one hand ,On the other hand ,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。