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成都七中擬選拔一批志愿者，利用寒假到汶川希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)。作為高二的學(xué)生，你希望參加此次活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)給校評(píng)選組寫一封申請(qǐng)信：
1. 你的認(rèn)識(shí)（如本人、學(xué)生以及社會(huì)的益處等）；
2. 優(yōu)勢(shì)（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語(yǔ)言能力等）；
3. 你的計(jì)劃（如怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等）。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于100；
2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3. 信的開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：汶川希望小學(xué) Wenchuan Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a Senior Two student in Chengdu No.7 High School._________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
XXX

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a Senior Two student in Chengdu No.7 High School. I learn that some volunteers are needed to help the students in Wenchuan Hope School with their English in the coming winter holiday.
I am deeply impressed. I think the activity is not only helpful to the students there, but also beneficial to anyone participating in it. Besides, it will help build a harmonious society.
Therefore, I am writing to apply for a position. I’m now in charge of the “School English Corner”. I’m quite fluent in English and able to organize activities. What’s more, I’m easy-going and independent. Taking good care of others is also one of my strengths.
If I’m offered the opportunity, I’ll be ready to help them start from improving their pronunciation and intonation through activities.
Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
XXX

試題分析：應(yīng)寫清申請(qǐng)的具體內(nèi)容和緣由；自己的情況和條件；提出要求，如回信、面試等等。對(duì)于不同的申請(qǐng)內(nèi)容，在介紹自己情況的時(shí)候也要有不同的側(cè)重。例如在求學(xué)信中，應(yīng)比較側(cè)重介紹自己已有的學(xué)位及專業(yè)情況；在申請(qǐng)留學(xué)經(jīng)濟(jì)資助的信中，應(yīng)著重介紹自己的學(xué)業(yè)及學(xué)術(shù)水平，因?yàn)閲?guó)外很多學(xué)校頒發(fā)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金是以此為標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫申請(qǐng)信應(yīng)注意：第一，語(yǔ)氣要誠(chéng)摯友好千萬(wàn)不要表現(xiàn)出強(qiáng)求的意思；第二，對(duì)于申請(qǐng)的內(nèi)容和原因一定要寫得非常清楚；第三，盡管不能表現(xiàn)出強(qiáng)求的意思，但是期望得到的心情一定要表達(dá)出來(lái)。信可用的是齊頭式，也可用縮進(jìn)式，信頭和信內(nèi)地址都已省略。