Question

假定你是李華，在參加北京外國(guó)大學(xué)自主招生考試（BFSU’s pre-test）期間，于3月2日入住一家賓館606房間，3月6日退房。你回家后發(fā)現(xiàn)把一個(gè)藍(lán)色背包遺失在那里，內(nèi)有幾本備考書籍，一個(gè)紅色限量版ipod，和一張信用卡。現(xiàn)請(qǐng)用英文給該賓館經(jīng)理寫一封信，請(qǐng)他/她幫忙尋找并寄回。
信件要點(diǎn)包括：(1)陳述寫信原因  (2)簡(jiǎn)要描述該背包  (3)說明其重要性  (4)·期待回復(fù)并表示感謝
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。 2. 信件格式已為你給出。 3.生詞： 限量版 special edition
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay for BFDU’s pre-test._______________
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay for BFDU’s pre-test, but I’m writing to ask a favor to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel.
I checked in on Mar, 2 and out on Mar, 6. Setting off in a rush for the station, I left the pack in Room 606. It’s a blue,  backpack which contains some books that are wanted in reviewing NMET, a red ipod of special edition as well as a credit card. All in the pack matters to me, especially the ipod, a precious gift from my father on my 18^th birthday. So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss.
If you find it, would you please post it to me? The return address is on the envelope.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply and thank you for anything you can do for me.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。要求向賓館經(jīng)理寫一封信，請(qǐng)他/她幫忙尋找自己丟失的東西并寄回。信件要點(diǎn)包括：(1)陳述寫信原因  (2)簡(jiǎn)要描述該背包  (3)說明其重要性  (4)·期待回復(fù)并表示感謝，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。