Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
I was brought up in the countryside by my grandmother. She was a very courageous and inspiring woman and was very beautiful, too. In comparison with her or some of my classmates, I always felt that I was not beautiful or pretty. In fact, when I was studying in middle school, I thought I was not as good as other students and just because of these negative feelings, I was not very confident. One day, I went to the shoe shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got there, I noticed a foreign lady talking to a salesgirl. But the salesgirl didn’t understand what the foreigner was saying. They both looked worried. I went up to help them. The lady is an Australian. She wanted to buy a pair of travelling shoes. So I told it to the salesgirl. The lady was very glad when she took them. She spoke high praise for my spoken English and said that I was a pretty girl. Both of them expressed their thanks to me.
As a matter of fact, no one had ever praised me like that before. It was so encouraging. Suddenly I felt confident and happy. It is true that those words turned my life around.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)。
2．然后以約120個詞寫一篇記敘文，描寫表揚(yáng)或稱贊給人帶來的愉快和鼓舞，并包括以下要點(diǎn)：
a）敘述你或你的朋友被老師或其他人表揚(yáng)的一次真實(shí)或虛構(gòu)的經(jīng)歷；
b）被表揚(yáng)后的感覺是怎么樣的；
c）這次稱贊、表揚(yáng)帶來的影響。
【寫作要求】
1. 可以參照閱讀材料的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，組織故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
3. 作文題目已在答題卷中給出。
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

Praise can change a person
The writer was praised for his fluent spoken English when she helped an Austrian and the salesgirl as a translator in the shoe shop. This praise not only made her happy but also changed her attitude towards herself.
Praise is really magical. Perhaps many of us had such experience. Take myself as an example. I was very naughty in the primary school. Most of the teachers and even my parents felt headache of me. But it happened that I once got a very high mark in an examination and the head teacher told my parents about this. My parents praised me highly for this for quiet a long time and told neighbors about that. I felt really happy and greatly encouraged. Every time when I heard others talk to me about my excellent examination result, I thought to myself that I would work even harder and made greater progress.
Praise is very important and inspiring. Just as Shakespeare said, “our praise is our wages."

試題分析：考查議論文的寫作。本文的論點(diǎn)是表揚(yáng)對人的影響，表揚(yáng)可以改變一個人的一生，可以從自己親身經(jīng)歷的事情或者身邊的人所經(jīng)歷的事情來作為模板進(jìn)行敘述，要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評：本文對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。