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書(shū)面表達(dá)（10分）如今手機(jī)在中學(xué)生當(dāng)中使用越來(lái)越普遍，同學(xué)就“校園內(nèi)是否可以使用手機(jī)”進(jìn)行討論同學(xué)們對(duì)此各抒己見(jiàn). 請(qǐng)你給編輯寫(xiě)一封信，反映討論情況并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。

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1. 方便聯(lián)系	1．學(xué)校有公用電話(huà)	…
2. 突發(fā)事故，可求助	2．玩游戲 ，影響學(xué)習(xí)
3. 課余可放松自己	3. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，金錢(qián)

 
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Dear Editor,
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
Yours truly,
Wang Lin

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students My schoolmates have different opinions. Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others with the cell-phone, which also makes you feel safe especially in time of trouble. Besides, We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies.
While others think differently. First, the cell-phone in not a must in school, as there are some IC phones there, making it easy to call others. Second, many students often play e -games and send e-massages with their cell-phones, even in class, which will surely have bad effects on their study. Worse is to come, it will result in a great waste of time and money.
In my opinion, the cell-phone is a useful tool in our daily life. But it doesn't mean we can use freely in school. (it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.)
Yours truly,
Wang Lin

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