Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，現(xiàn)是北京大學(xué)的一名新生。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給你中學(xué)的英語(yǔ)老師王老師寫(xiě)一封感謝信，表達(dá)對(duì)他的愛(ài)戴和尊敬。詞數(shù)120左右。
提示：
1．對(duì)英語(yǔ)王老師教學(xué)的評(píng)價(jià)。
2．回顧在校時(shí)你的心情。
3．對(duì)老師的理解和祝愿。
信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr Wang,
I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now a freshman of Beijing University, which I have been dreaming about. Mr Wang, I still remember the days when you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed. I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college. Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. And now I really understand you. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Are you still so busy? How I miss you!
Look forward to hearing/Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，假設(shè)你叫李華，現(xiàn)是北京大學(xué)的一名新生。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給你中學(xué)的英語(yǔ)老師王老師寫(xiě)一封感謝信，表達(dá)對(duì)他的愛(ài)戴和尊敬，所以要用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。