Question

請(qǐng)你仔細(xì)觀察圖片，寫一篇120字的短文。你的短文應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：

1. 簡(jiǎn)單敘述圖片中的內(nèi)容；
2. 談?wù)劯改笇?duì)你的期待；
3. 你的看法和對(duì)將來(lái)的打算。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)120左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開(kāi)頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
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Answer 1

As is shown in the picture above, different parents have different expectations of children. Some parents are rich but they don’t have much education. So they hope that their children can go to college to be well-educated. For some, things are just the opposite. They want their children to make money.
My parents, though they are poor, don’t wish me to make money at an early time. They say school education is vital for a poor family. Qualified education is the first wise choice, which later makes a promising future.
I’m completely for what my parents expect of me. I believe wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand. To live up to my parents’ dreams, I will make every effort to be a wise learner and a brave discoverer in the future.

試題分析：本文文意新穎，寓意深刻。學(xué)生首先對(duì)圖片的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的陳述，如不同的父母親對(duì)孩子有不同的期望different parents have different expectations of children.分別對(duì)兩者截然相反的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，然后，結(jié)合自身的情況，談?wù)勛约焊改笇?duì)自己的期望，可以用They say school education is vital for a poor family.來(lái)表達(dá)或是運(yùn)用have a far-reaching effect on這個(gè)句型來(lái)表達(dá)教育對(duì)自己有深遠(yuǎn)的影響，最后說(shuō)明自己的看法和打算，說(shuō)明自己非常贊同父母的觀點(diǎn)，說(shuō)明智慧比金錢更重要wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.自己將不遺余力的去實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想make every effort to do sth.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的寫作是高考近幾年的趨勢(shì)，利用圖片的內(nèi)容來(lái)表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)，此類文章首先需要對(duì)圖片內(nèi)容進(jìn)行介紹，然后根據(jù)要求寫作。注意對(duì)不會(huì)的表達(dá)進(jìn)行替換，同時(shí)注意避免使用中式英文和硬譯。對(duì)于高中作文的寫作要注意多使用被動(dòng)，倒裝、虛擬來(lái)提升作文的美度。在平時(shí)寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對(duì)閱讀過(guò)程中寫的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。