Question

假如你是王平，你作為交換生，已經(jīng)在美國加州留學(xué)六個月了。你的朋友李華來信詢問你在美國學(xué)習(xí)生活的情況，請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給李華寫一封回信。
[寫作內(nèi)容]

剛到美國	現(xiàn)在
第一次到美國，很難融入當(dāng)?shù)厝说纳�活�?br />	調(diào)節(jié)自我，適應(yīng)新環(huán)境
語言不通	英語口語進(jìn)步大
想家	有賓至如歸的感覺
不習(xí)慣美國的學(xué)習(xí)模式	學(xué)習(xí)預(yù)科課程，適應(yīng)美國的教學(xué)，成為一個自主學(xué)習(xí)者。

[寫作要求]  1. 必須使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。
2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)內(nèi)。
3. 預(yù)科課程：the preparation course
Dear Li Hua,
Thanks for your letter. I am very glad to tell you about my life and study here as an exchange student in California, the USA. Six months ago, … …
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Hope to see you again soon.
Best wishes.
Love,
Wang Ping

Answer 1

A possible version:
Dear Li Hua,
Thanks for your letter. I am very glad to tell you about my life and study here as an exchange student in California, the USA. Six months ago, it was my first time that I had been to the USA, so it was really difficult for me to fit in with the life here. On my arrival here, I couldn’t understand what people said or communicate freely with them in English, and nor could I get used to the different study pattern here, so I missed home a lot. Fortunately, I have adjusted myself to the new surroundings as soon as possible and seized every opportunity to practice speaking English with the local people. As a result, now I have made rapid progress in oral English and felt at home to live here. What’s more, I’ve also attended the preparation course which helps me to get used to the academic requirements in America and become a more autonomous learner.
Hope to see you again soon.
Best wishes.
Love,
Wang Ping

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。