Question

請根據(jù)下列提示，以 “Mr. Sun—my English teacher”為題，寫一篇短文。
孫老師是一位中年教師，戴一副近視眼鏡。
他有耐心，富有想象力，講課生動有趣，專心致力于教學(xué)，經(jīng)常備課到很晚；在他的幫助下，我開始對英語感興趣，并取得進步。
課外和學(xué)生一起活動，深受學(xué)生歡迎，是學(xué)生的良師益友。
注意： 1. 短文必須包括以上所有要點，可以適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)：100 左右。

Answer 1

Mr. Sun, my English teacher, is a middle-aged man with a pair of glasses.
He is a teacher with patience and imagination. Although sometimes he is very strict with us in our studies, his humor makes his classes lively and interesting. With his help, I am beginning to show interest in English and have made great progress. He works so hard that he devotes all his time and energy to teaching, often preparing his lessons late into night.
What’s more, he often joins us in after-class activities.
He is not only our teacher, but also our friend. We all love and respect him.

試題分析：考查提綱作文。本篇作文比較簡單，介紹一個人物。而且孫老師的具體的情況都已經(jīng)通過提綱給了出來，對于考生來說只需要翻譯即可。在串聯(lián)全文的時候要使用合適的連接詞來連接，如What’s more等。同時也要使用高級的詞匯和和復(fù)雜的句式提示文章的文采和檔次，如范文的句子：He works so hard that he devotes all his time and energy to teaching, often preparing his lessons late into night.用了so that句型和現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，在文章的最后可以使用倒裝句的形式來加強文章的語氣，形成豹尾的結(jié)局。
點評：提綱類作文的要點都給出來了，所以一定要注意要點的完整性，不要遺漏，同時要注意使用多樣句式，讓文章富有變化，更有層次。