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1．財富比健康重要，富人受人尊重，而窮人受人歧視。
2．健康勝于財富，健康的人才能享受生活。
3．你自己的看法。
Health and Wealth, Which Is More Important
Some people hold that wealth is more important than health．

Answer 1

Some people hold that wealth is more important than health. They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world, while a poor person will be looked down upon by others. Therefore, a person who tries all means to make money will be considered (to be) a hero no matter whether he is in good or poor health.
However ,the majority of people believe that health is more important than wealth . For example, a healthy scientist can achieve more success in his scientific research .Only if a person enjoys good health ,can he really enjoy his life.
In my opinion, health is more important than wealth .Good health can bring us success as well as real happiness . So ,health is the most important thing that one has to treasure in this world.

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。而且我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。這就要求平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點說明】They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world, while a poor person will be looked down upon by others. 這句話里面有賓語從句，也能正確使用連詞while，還有Only if a person enjoys good health ,can he really enjoy his life.這是一個倒裝句