Question

假如你是李華，上周在英國(guó)參加了你校組織的“中學(xué)生文化交流周”活動(dòng)，并住在Kelly家里。請(qǐng)你給在英國(guó)期間認(rèn)識(shí)的新朋友Kelly寫(xiě)封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：
交流活動(dòng)中的收獲;
難忘在Kelly家的美好日子;
感謝她送你的英文詞典。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;
3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
提示詞匯：文化交流周 Cultural Exchange Week
Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back home safely from England.                                                
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.
Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.
What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together.
Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It’s a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一篇書(shū)信。文章給出了提綱式漢語(yǔ)提示。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意一下幾點(diǎn)：（1）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全；a交流活動(dòng)中的收獲;b難忘在Kelly家的美好日子;c感謝她送你的英文詞典。（2）人稱：以第一人稱為主；（3）時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；（4）適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢；（5）恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】1.使用高級(jí)句型：（1）I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.（2）It’s a great help for me to learn English well.2.使用了過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)：What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. Of course, I also made many new friends. 3.使用了重要短語(yǔ)：I will treasure and make full use of it. I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country.