Question

最近，你們班英語課上老師組織一次主題為“Does beauty really make much sense?”的討論。根據(jù)下面同學(xué)們的討論結(jié)果用英語寫一篇120字左右的短文并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)。
1.學(xué)生觀點(diǎn)1：一副好面孔就是一張通行證,在社交、求職、競爭中起著重要作用。
2.學(xué)生觀點(diǎn)2：漂亮不等于勝任工作,只有追求內(nèi)在完美才是真正的美。
3.你的觀點(diǎn)……
參考詞匯：通行證：pass    社交: social communication
內(nèi)在美：spiritual beauty.
Does beauty really make much sense?
Last week in our English class, we had a very heated discussion on the topic—does beauty really make much sense?                                                            
                                                                   

Answer 1

One possible version:
Does beauty really make much sense?
Last week in our English class, we had a very heated discussion on the topic—does beauty really make much sense? Some students think that a good face is a pass. Good appearance often makes a big difference in social communication, social competition, job hunting and so on. Not only can it make you become more confident but also it makes you impressive in the job interview.
Other students hold different opinions. Good appearance doesn’t make any difference. Spiritual beauty is more important. A beautiful person is not necessarily one with good looking, but one with a great talent and kind heart.
As far as I am concerned, both physical beauty and spiritual beauty are very important. What I want to say is that we should never ignore our spiritual beauty training while simply pursuing good appearance.

試題分析：要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如Some students think that a good face is a pass, Not only can it make you become more confident but also it makes you impressive in the job interview.還運(yùn)用了What I want to say is that…; 主語從句及倒裝句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：As far as I am concerned等等。
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