Question

你校正在開(kāi)展“和諧宿舍生活”的主題周活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)按下列要求寫(xiě)一篇100-120詞的英語(yǔ)短文向英語(yǔ)社投稿：
1. 闡明和諧宿舍生活的必要性；
2. 提出建議。
注意：短文的開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
參考詞匯：harmonious和諧的；  harmony和諧
Dormitory life is regarded as an important part of school life. _______________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Dormitory life is regarded as an important part of school life. A harmonious dormitory life is of great significance to students’ study and emotion as well. Only in a condition where nothing annoying exists can we put our heart and soul into study. Besides, a dormitory life filled with harmony can promote mutual understanding, helping building up a good relationship between roommates.
In order to maintain a harmonious dormitory life, we should form a healthy style and try to get rid of the bad habits, if there are any. Additionally, when an annoying situation arises, we need to communicate sincerely with or tolerate each other and co-exist. Moreover, we’d better share happiness and sorrow with each other so as to lay a solid foundation for mutual understanding.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，對(duì)此話題考生非常熟悉，應(yīng)該有話可說(shuō)。考生在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是對(duì)構(gòu)建“和諧宿舍生活”的重要性進(jìn)行闡述及如何構(gòu)建 “和諧宿舍生活”提出建議，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。其實(shí)本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)的開(kāi)放程度還是蠻大的。題目中所列的兩點(diǎn)“闡明和諧宿舍生活的必要性”和“提出建議”都需要考生自擬。因此在自擬要點(diǎn)時(shí)，考生要注意圍繞主題去聯(lián)想和展開(kāi)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如significance，emotion, as well, promote mutual understanding, maintain a harmonious dormitory life get rid of the bad habits等。倒裝句“Only in a condition where nothing annoying exists can we put our heart and soul into study”以及狀語(yǔ)從句“if there are any”“when an annoying situation arises”的運(yùn)用更是錦上添花。此外非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞“helping building up, In order to maintain a harmonious dormitory life, try to get rid of ,so as to lay a solid foundation for mutual understanding.”的使用更顯作者語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用的功力。作者還注意了上下文的銜接：“Besides,，Additionally, Moreover”等等的使用使文章順暢連貫。