Question

在高中即將畢業(yè)之際，請你用英語準備一篇“國旗下講話”的演講稿。
內容要求：
1. 高中三年的收獲和遺憾；
2. 展望大學生活所面臨的挑戰(zhàn)；
3．對高一，高二學生的建議。
注意：
1. 可適當發(fā)揮，使文章內容充實、連貫；
2. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；
4. 詞數(shù)120左右。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning!
As I am graduating, I’d like to ____________________________________________
Good luck to all of you!
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

As I am graduating, I’d like to look back on my unforgettable years here.
In the past three years, I’ve benefited a lot from my school education, which helps me grow into an independent thinker and an efficient learner, as well as preparing for the future.
However, during this period, I was too concerned about my academic performance to get actively involved in the extra-curriculum activities. That left me a little regretful and will always remind me to better myself in an all-round way.
Looking ahead, I think the biggest challenge in my college life will be adapting to a life away from my parents and taking care of myself. But I’m full of confidence that I’ll get used to it soon and move on.
I also want to make some suggestions to you, Senior 1 and 2 students. Time and tide wait for no man. We teenagers should make the most of our valuable time at high school and realize our full potential.
Good luck to all of you!
Yours
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一封演講稿。話題是要求用英語準備一篇“國旗下講話”的演講稿。具有很強的可寫性，內容貼近考生的實際情況，考生有話可說，有話可寫。文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，但只是一個提綱，考生還需要做適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫作的過程中要注意使用合適的連接詞，同時也要注意使用一些高級的句型如強調句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。本更有文采。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：for one thing，What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔的表達自己的觀點。
【亮點說明】In the past three years, I’ve benefited a lot from my school education, which helps me grow into an independent thinker and an efficient learner, as well as preparing for the future.這句話用了非限制性定語從句和as well as這樣的關聯(lián)詞，I was too concerned about my academic performance to get actively involved in the extra-curriculum activities.這句話用的是too…to…結構，和get involved in詞組，Looking ahead, I think the biggest challenge in my college life will be adapting to a life away from my parents and taking care of myself.這句話使用非謂語動詞做狀語和adapt to這個詞組。