Question

李華準備到外企求職，必須具備一定的英語水平。請發(fā)e­mail告知他學英語的方法。
提示：1.養(yǎng)成良好的學習英語的習慣(如……)；
2.多看英語電視節(jié)目和電影，擴大詞匯量；
3.要有自信；多講，多用，不要怕出錯。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.電子郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好(不計入你所寫詞數(shù))；
3.以第一人稱寫。
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Yours，
Deanne

Answer 1

Dear Xiao Ming,
I’m glad to offer you some advice.
In my opinion, forming good habits to learn English is very important, such as reading aloud, listening to English songs and communicating with native speakers of English. Fortunately, you have easy access to English because there are English programmes on TV and English films . Also, reading can often enlarge your vocabulary, which may be the biggest challenge for you. In addition, you should have confidence in yourself. Try to speak English whenever possible, just as a proverb goes, practice makes perfect. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, you are sure to improve your English.
I hope that my advice will be helpful.
Yours,
Deanne

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。李華準備到外企求職，必須具備一定的英語水平。請發(fā)e­mail告知他學英語的方法。要點都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎上增加細節(jié)，同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還要用適當?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點說明】In my opinion, forming good habits to learn English is very important, such as reading aloud, listening to English songs and communicating with native speakers of English.這句話是動名詞做主語，F(xiàn)ortunately, you have easy access to English because there are English programmes on TV and English films . 這句話里面用了原因狀語從句和have access to這個詞組， reading can often enlarge your vocabulary, which may be the biggest challenge for you.這句話里面用了非限制性定語從句 Try to speak English whenever possible, just as a proverb goes, practice makes perfect. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句和省略，還有諺語，還有考生要學習使用Also, In addition,等關聯(lián)詞