Question

假如你是李華，你進(jìn)入邢臺(tái)一中開(kāi)始了新的高中生活。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀闳绾斡�接你的高中生活。�?nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：
1.確定學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)和改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法.
2.處理好與同學(xué)的關(guān)系.
3.參加各種課外活動(dòng).
注意：（1）短文的內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；
（2）短文字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右。
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

With time going on, the new high school life is coming near.
After I enter high school, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. What’s more, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some homework and studying by myself.
In my spare time，I will take part in different kinds of school activities to enlarge my knowledge. For example, I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. In addition, I need to get along well with my classmates and teachers at high school.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式作文：談?wù)勀闳绾斡�接你的高中生活。要點(diǎn)都給出了，關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。因?yàn)橹皇翘峋V，沒(méi)有具體的要點(diǎn)，要根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】With time going on, the new high school life is coming near.這句話用了with符合結(jié)構(gòu)， it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some homework and studying by myself.這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， In my spare time，I will take part in different kinds of school activities to enlarge my knowledge. I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. 這兩句話用了不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)，還有范文還用了 What’s more, In addition, For example,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。