Question

Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
作為高中生，無(wú)論生活上還是學(xué)習(xí)上，你或多或少都會(huì)有壓力。想想你的壓力是什么？是什么造成了你的這些壓力？你是如何應(yīng)對(duì)這些壓力的？

Answer 1

One possible version:
As is known to all, the high school curriculum is becoming increasingly tight-scheduled and pressuring. I often feel constantly stressed and worried, especially when taking an exam. I can’t eat well, or sleep well. Because I am anxious to study in a famous university. 
There are some methods I have tried. A large number of physical activities can reduce my anxiety. Sharing stress with my friends can be enormously helpful. Making time for fun such as listening to music may be good medicine. Sometimes even crying is an efficient way to release stress.
What’s more, reading novels or watching some TV programs can help me reduce my stress as well. However, playing computer games is not recommended. In my opinion, students should relax via beneficial and productive means.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的�？忌�在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是對(duì)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活中存在的壓力現(xiàn)象，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。要求談?wù)勀愕膲毫κ鞘裁�、造成了這些壓力原因以及你是如何應(yīng)對(duì)這些壓力的，因此本文必須用第一人稱(chēng)。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如，As is known to all, a large number of，還運(yùn)用了It is  adj  for sb to do sth;等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：especially，such as,What’s more 等等。