Question

有些高中生有時與同學發(fā)生這樣或那樣的矛盾或沖突，這些問題會給大家?guī)�來煩惱甚至影響大家的學習。請你用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文，分析一下產(chǎn)生矛盾或沖突的原因，并談談應如何正確地與同學相處。（關鍵詞：classmate conflicts）
                                                                   
                                                                   

Answer 1

Classmate conflicts among senior middle school students are often heard on campus over recent years. These conflicts make the excitement of campus life grow grey and have bad effects on both their living and learning. Classmate conflicts often rise from daily tiny things such as space where to store books or notes.
When personalities don’t mix the specifics can tear classmates apart and sometimes even lead to serious conflicts. Besides the fact that classmates hold different attitudes towards certain issues is another factor causing these conflicts.
Classmate conflicts are harmful and need to be settled. Though many people think that school discipline can soften the conflicts I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a more constructive role because it teaches students flexibility and the art of compromise. Meanwhile communication contributes to the solution to this problem since many of these conflicts result from misunderstanding

試題分析：考查開放式作文，考生在寫作時要注意根據(jù)英文提示，切忌偏題，短文主要談的是“同學間的矛盾問題”，描述自己的飲食習慣，要求分析一下產(chǎn)生矛盾或沖突的原因，并談談應如何正確地與同學相處。考生要緊緊抓住這些特點，結(jié)合生活中的一個事例，適當展開自己的想象。，開放式作文難就難在沒有要點，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地大，但也增加了難度，有的考生會覺得無話可說，這時可以充分利用所給的信息，展開陳述，但要符合英語習慣，句式選擇要富有變化。在寫作的過程中注意句型的多樣化和連接詞的使用。要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體。
【亮點說明】 Classmate conflicts often rise from daily tiny things such as space where to store books or notes. 這句話用的是疑問詞+不定式做定語， the fact that classmates hold different attitudes towards certain issues is another factor causing these conflicts. 這句話是用同位語從句， Though many people think that school discipline can soften the conflicts I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a more constructive role because it teaches students flexibility and the art of compromise. 這句話是個復雜句：里面有讓步狀語從句，賓語從句，動名詞做主語， communication contributes to the solution to this problem since many of these conflicts result from misunderstanding 還有Meanwhile和 Besides這樣的關聯(lián)詞也要經(jīng)常使用。