Question

國(guó)際文化交流中心將組織一次各國(guó)學(xué)生參加的“和平、友誼” 夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，要求報(bào)名者提
交英文個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷。假如你是王珊，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息寫一篇個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷。
姓名：王珊    性別：女
年齡：16歲    學(xué)校：北京陽(yáng)光中學(xué)
其他：愛好音樂、攝影；善于與人交流，樂于助人；熱愛自然，熱愛和平
參加夏令營(yíng)目的：結(jié)交朋友，了解外國(guó)文化。
My name is Wang Shan.
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Answer 1

My name is Wang Shan. I’m a 16-year-old girl studying in Beijing Yangguang
Middle School. I like music, especially classical music. I’m also interested in
photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life.
I’m good at communicating with others and always ready to help other
people. Furthermore, I love nature. Whenever I’m free, I’ll travel to beautiful natural attractions to experience natural wonders with my family. In addition, I love peace, and
I hope all nations in the world can live in a peaceful environment and lead a happy life.
The purpose of my intending to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp is to make more friends from foreign countries, and to have an access to the insight of foreign
cultures. I hope I can do something for the world peace. I’m sure I’ll be learning a lot from the Summer Camp.

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，1.本文主題引入自然，而且把學(xué)生學(xué)校生活與社會(huì)生活緊密結(jié)合在一起。2.要求明確，整體難度適中。3.本文寫作注意以下幾點(diǎn):  A.要求寫一篇簡(jiǎn)歷，注意結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)言上的特點(diǎn)。B.注意表中“其它”和“目的”兩項(xiàng)應(yīng)該是重點(diǎn)要表達(dá)到位的內(nèi)容。文字提示里所出了要點(diǎn)，考生可以翻譯，并且做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在寫作的過程中，一定要注意使用合適的連接詞來連接全文，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體。同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型提升問的文采和層次。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類作文最重要的是要把所有的要點(diǎn)都包括在內(nèi)，不能有遺漏或省略。本文所給要點(diǎn)很全，不需要考生做較多的發(fā)揮，在寫作時(shí)，注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更有文采。