Question

If one has no confidence, there is little possibility that one can achieve anything when faced with hardships.
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合校園生活中的一個(gè)事例；
④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
⑤詞數(shù)120左右。

Answer 1

One possible version:
Whatever one does, one should do it with confidence. Equipped with confidence, we can deal with any challenges and difficulties until we succeed.
When I entered Senior 3, I found myself faced with difficulty learning English, and even failed in my English exam. As a consequence I began to feel frustrated, losing confidence in myself. It was at this moment that my parents encouraged me, and my teachers gave me some valuable advice on my studies, telling me to be confident. With their help, I regained my confidence and began to make steady progress.
As the saying goes, where there’s a will, there’s a way. If we are to make a difference, we should build up our confidence, which is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and finally achieve our goal.

試題分析：話題作文要求考生根據(jù)英文提示，結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例，根據(jù)所給的英語(yǔ)提示，寫(xiě)一篇話題作文。這種“開(kāi)放式”的論述文的命題形式給考生很大的自由發(fā)揮空間，對(duì)寫(xiě)作的布局謀篇提出了較高要求，要求考生既要會(huì)發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)認(rèn)識(shí)，又要會(huì)進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)敘述。這種寫(xiě)作命題有利于立體考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言知識(shí)、創(chuàng)新思維能力和價(jià)值觀，具有較強(qiáng)的選拔功能。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如Equipped with confidence, make a difference還運(yùn)用了It was at this moment that強(qiáng)調(diào)句型; which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：As the saying goes，As a consequence等等。
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