Question

書面表達（滿分25分）
假設你是Tom, 是一名高一新生。請你給自己的初中同學Jack寫一封信，簡要介紹自己的高中生活。
要點：
1）已經(jīng)適應了高中的生活，并且交了好多朋友。
非常想念過去的老師和同學們；與現(xiàn)在的同學相處很好，對老師很滿意。
自己一定努力學習，為的是三年以后能夠上個好的大學。
注意：1）數(shù)80左右2）頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)
Dear Jack,
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Answer 1

Dear Jack,
How time flies! I have been in high school for a whole month. At the beginning of this term, I felt a little lonely. But now I have made many new friends. By now, I have got used to my new life here. I miss all the teachers and classmates in Junior Middle school. At the same time, I get along well with my new classmates. The teachers here are very humorous and I like them very much. I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.
Yours,
Tom

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。請你給自己的初中同學Jack寫一封信，簡要介紹自己的高中生活。要點都已經(jīng)給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。象范文的I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.使用了because引導的原因狀語從句和it做形式主語的句型，還要用適當?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象Firstly. Secondly, Thirdly, At the same time等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
點評：書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。