Question

人們完成工作的方式通常有兩種：獨(dú)立完成與合作完成。兩種方式各有特點(diǎn)。請你以“working Individually or Working in a Team “為題，按照以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語短文：
1．獨(dú)立完成：自行安排、自己解決問題
2．合作完成：一起討論、相互學(xué)習(xí)
3．我喜歡的方式及理由.
注意：詞數(shù)120--150，文章的題目和開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
Working Individually or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done.
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Answer 1

Working Individually or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done． One is to work individually． In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it．What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own．
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other。Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion．
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them． As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently.Teamwork is always important．

試題分析：
★文體分析
本文是議論文，主要就兩種完成工作的方式進(jìn)行對比，要求考生根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫作。文章應(yīng)使用第三人稱，時態(tài)用是一般現(xiàn)在時。
★行文模式
本文可采用議論文最常見的“三段式”結(jié)構(gòu)：
第一段：首先點(diǎn)出文章的主題，然后緊接著描寫了獨(dú)立完成工作這種方式，點(diǎn)出了這種工作方式的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。
第二段：描述的是合作完成工作方式的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。
第三段：發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。
點(diǎn)評：此范文要點(diǎn)齊全，較多地使用了復(fù)合句，加強(qiáng)了句子結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜性。另外，本文使用了許多過渡短語或詞匯。如：in this way, what’s more, besides, personally等，這些詞匯使文章邏輯關(guān)系增強(qiáng)，過渡自然，渾然一體。
★佳句集錦
1. A) People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other.
B) Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.
(這兩個句子都是主從復(fù)合句，都使用了定語從句，一個是where引導(dǎo)的，另一個是which引導(dǎo)的。在英語書面表達(dá)中，我們經(jīng)常借助于定語從句來使句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜，所以這兩句值得在寫作中學(xué)習(xí)。)
2. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently.
(這也是一個主從復(fù)合句。as引導(dǎo)的是原因狀語從句。)