Question

假如你是李越，你校正在開(kāi)展 “低碳生活” 的倡議活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己的建議，向全校師生寫(xiě)一封倡議書(shū)。
要點(diǎn)如下：
一、寫(xiě)信目的
二、你的建議（如：盡量乘公交車、走路或騎車；使用環(huán)保袋；雙面使用紙張……）
三、你的希望
要求：100-120詞左右；首句已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
參考詞匯： low carbon lifestyle 低碳生活
recycled bag  環(huán)保袋
Dear everyone,
“The low carbon lifestyle”programme is right now taking place in our school, ________
Li Yue

Answer 1

Dear everyone,
“The low carbon lifestyle” programme is right now taking place in our school, and I’d like to give some advice to both teachers and students in our life. First, I recommend that we walk, ride or take a public bus to school. Second, every time we want to buy something, we can make full use of the recycled bags to replace the plastic bags, which will protect our environment. Meanwhile, it would be more beneficial if paper could be used to full extent, namely, we must write on both sides. Furthermore, with energy crisis threatening our lives, water and electricity, two of our major necessities, have to be consumed wisely and economically. Every effort from us can make a real difference. I believe that we can lead a healthy and sustainable low carbon life.
Thanks for your concern. I hope my suggestions practical and helpful and that everyone will be glad to join in and try our best to form a harmonious relationship with the environment. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　          　                                                                                                                                                                             
Li  Yue

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文。本文只給出了一個(gè)大綱，大部分的考點(diǎn)都要考生自己梳理出來(lái)。要在描述目的的時(shí)候，可以從營(yíng)造一個(gè)良好的環(huán)境保護(hù)的氛圍和提高人們的的環(huán)境保護(hù)的意識(shí)方面著手。提出希望的時(shí)候，可以從政府加強(qiáng)環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的教育，更多的宣傳環(huán)境保護(hù)的理念等方面著手，倡導(dǎo)每個(gè)人從自己做起，從身邊小事做起。來(lái)真正地提高我們的環(huán)保意識(shí)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文的寫(xiě)作對(duì)考生來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)難點(diǎn)，要根據(jù)大綱自己發(fā)現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)，本文的難點(diǎn)在于運(yùn)用合適的詞匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá)語(yǔ)義，因?yàn)橐郧暗奶峋V類作文的思維量不大，本文要求考生自己謀篇布局，組織文章的上下文結(jié)構(gòu)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文，使之成為一個(gè)整體。