Question

假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，剛參加完“美國高校一周游”的夏令營活動(dòng)，在離開之前，你想給新結(jié)交的美國朋友Monica寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1.表示感謝；
2.描述參加比次夏令營的收獲；
3.邀請(qǐng)她參加明年在中國的夏令營。
注意：1.可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)使文章連貫；字?jǐn)?shù)：120-150.
2.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Monica,
                                                                              
 
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your company while I was on this summer camp, which was an unforgettable experience for me and I also benefited a lot from it.
Through visiting American universities, I got a good knowledge of American universities-tourist attractions in some way, which broadened my horizon and introduced me to more about American culture. Besides, during the summer camp, I made some American friends, just like you, who gave me lots of assistance. Moreover, in an environment exposed to English language, my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly.
Would you like to join the summer camp in China next summer? I'll be you best guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture, and enjoy tasty Chinese food, etc.
I'm looking forward to your coming.

試題分析：本文屬于半開放性的作文，只是給出了概要，大部分的內(nèi)容要求考生自己梳理。在文章中可以選擇在此次夏令營中的一些典型事例來表明對(duì)方對(duì)你的幫助能促進(jìn)你的進(jìn)步和成長。以此表示感謝。描述本次夏令營的收獲的時(shí)候，可以從語言，能力和跨文化意識(shí)等方面著手。最后邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方來中國參觀。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題的難度在于要點(diǎn)的梳理，要描述本次夏令營中的典型事例來說明本次夏令營對(duì)你的幫助，在寫作的時(shí)候需要選用一些高級(jí)的詞匯和句型來提高文章的文采，運(yùn)用連接詞來讓文章成為一個(gè)整體，更流暢。