Question

最近你班同學(xué)就許多家長在學(xué)校附近租（rent）房陪讀的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行了討論，請(qǐng)根據(jù)討論結(jié)果寫一篇100詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />

贊成（35%）	反對(duì)（65%）	你的觀點(diǎn)
環(huán)境好、條件好， 利于學(xué)習(xí)	浪費(fèi)錢、消耗父母精力； 增加學(xué)生精神負(fù)擔(dān)	……

參考詞匯：陪伴 company  租 rent
Recently, our class have had a discussion about whether it is necessary for parents to rent a house to company their children near the school.
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Answer 1

Recently, our class have had a discussion about whether it is necessary for parents to rent a house to company their children near the school.
35% of my classmates support the idea. They say they’d rather live in such a house because the conditions and the environment there are much better, which they think is very necessary for their studies. However, 65% of the students don’t think it a good idea. In their opinion, it is a waste of money and parents’ energy. Besides, the parents’ company may make the children feel more nervous.
Since every coin has its two sides, I think everyone should consider their own personal situation before they decide whether they need to rent a house and their parents’ company.

試題分析：本文屬于正反觀點(diǎn)類的議論文，高三的考生對(duì)于此類題目是非常熟悉的。話題是陪讀的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，本文要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，考生只需要翻譯成英語。在寫作的過程中要添加合適的連接詞，如for one thing, for another; As far as I am concerned等。讓各要點(diǎn)組成一個(gè)有機(jī)聯(lián)系的整體。同時(shí)也要使用高級(jí)的詞匯和句型給文章增加文采。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本篇文章內(nèi)容比較簡單，難度在于謀篇布局和組織要點(diǎn)發(fā)表個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，要使用合適的諺語來提高文章的檔次和層次。