Question

請從下列人物中選擇你最喜歡的一位，用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文。要求根據(jù)所給信息作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，且需包括以下三部分內(nèi)容：
1．對該人物的簡單介紹；
2．喜歡該人物的理由；
3．從該人物身上得到的啟示。

Thomas Edison	Helen Keller	William Shakespeare
inventor; creative; diligent; full of wisdom	ordinary but great woman; disabled; optimistic; eager to learn	writer; talented; imaginative; man of all ages
“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine perspiration.”	“…if I had the power of sight for three days.”	“Life is a stage…”

Answer 1

Sample 1: Thomas Edison
Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination.
I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1,000 inventions. In his life time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Melo Park”. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many great inventions.
What impresses me most is his famous saying: “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine perspiration”. Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.                         (157 words)
Sample 2: Helen Keller
Every time I read “… if I had the power of sight for three days”, I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman.
I admire Helen because she was optimistic about life. She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old. Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence, and communication seemed only a dream for her. But she never gave up and struggled to lead an active life. Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms Sullivan, Helen learned to read and write and became a famous writer. For a disabled person like her, this was really a wonder!
Helen has set an excellent example to all of us. Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.              (143 words)
Sample 3: William Shakespeare
Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favourite English writer and the man of all ages!
Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world. I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life!
Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone has his own role to play, and I will try my best to play my role well.           (135 words)

試題分析：本文屬于人物傳記類短文寫作，屬于半開放性的作文，對考生的要求較高。要求考生自行組織要點(diǎn)，在進(jìn)行串聯(lián)寫作。寫作時(shí)要使用合適的連接詞連接起全文，同時(shí)注意按照時(shí)間順序來組織全文，使文章更有條理。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文較為新穎，給的要點(diǎn)很少，而且是以英語的形式出現(xiàn)，對考生的要求較高，屬于半開放性的作文，但給考生的余地也較大�？梢宰鲞m當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，使用高級(jí)詞匯，短語，句型，最主要使用合適的連接詞來理解全文，使之成為整體。