Question

假設你是李華，你的好友王林生病了。現(xiàn)在請你給他寫一封信，要點包括：
1.聽到好友生病時的心情；
2.勸他放棄熬夜等壞習慣；
3.建議他身體康復后要保證睡眠，經(jīng)常鍛煉，合理飲食。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Wang Lin,

Answer 1

Dear Wang Lin,
I am terribly sorry that you have been ill for a few days and I hope that you will get well soon. You often stay up late at night, which is really a bad habit. Staying up has done great harm to your health and I hope that you can give up the bad habit.
To keep healthy, you should have enough sleep and take regular exercise. Taking proper exercise can make you active and keep you fit. In addition, you should eat a balanced diet, which is helpful to your health.
Your,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，是安慰生病的對方。文章的要點都已經(jīng)給出來了，在寫作的時候要包括所有的要點，不要有任何的遺漏。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各個要點，使之成為一個整體，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型讓文章更有檔次。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，關(guān)鍵是抓住要點，要使用合適的連接詞來連接。同時要變換使用多種句式，提高文章的檔次。