Question

坐火車旅行還是乘飛機(jī)旅行
人們?cè)诠ぷ髦�余都喜歡去旅游，有人坐火車，有人喜歡乘飛機(jī)，請(qǐng)以“Train Travel Air Travel”為題 寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于坐火車，和乘飛機(jī)各自優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的文章，內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1、飛機(jī)速度很快，可以節(jié)約時(shí)間； 乘坐更舒適。但價(jià)格較貴
2、坐火車可以欣賞到沿途的風(fēng)景；而且價(jià)格更便宜。但有時(shí)很擁擠，乘坐時(shí)間常，容易疲勞。
3、說(shuō)說(shuō)你的觀點(diǎn)。   
注意:不能逐字逐句的翻譯，可以適當(dāng)?shù)呐e例說(shuō)明。
Train Travel Air Travel
More and more people like travelling, some of them like travelling by train ,but some prefer to taking the plane.
                                                                                
Yours;
Li Hua

Answer 1

Train Travel Air Travel
Air travel has two advantages over train travel. First, it can save much time. We can fly from Beijing to Guangzhou just in two hours, but by train, we have to spend 24 hours or more. Second, air travel is more comfortable, because the plane flies so smoothly that we can rest well during the trip, while the train is crowded sometimes and passengers have to sit for a long time, which makes them tired. But train travel also has its advantages. For example, traveling by train costs only 250 yuan while traveling by air will cost 900 yuan. Besides this, outside of the train's windows, we can enjoy the views of many big cities, such as Zhengzhou, Wuhan, and Changsha.
So I think different people like different ways of traveling

本文是考生比較熟悉的題材，是關(guān)于坐火車和坐飛機(jī)旅游的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)的文章，文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，考生需要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成流暢的短文，如first, second等。也可以使用相對(duì)高級(jí)的句型如倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候要注意使用諺語(yǔ)如every coin has two sides(事物都有兩方面)等來(lái)提升文章的檔次，以取得高分。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類文章可以使用模板，切記不要寫(xiě)成流水賬。優(yōu)點(diǎn)歸優(yōu)點(diǎn)寫(xiě)，缺點(diǎn)歸缺點(diǎn)來(lái)寫(xiě)。不要混著寫(xiě)，會(huì)顯的沒(méi)有條理。