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我班就“有些學(xué)生在學(xué)校貼吧上發(fā)表對(duì)老師不滿的言語”一事是否妥當(dāng)進(jìn)行討論。下面是討論的結(jié)果。請(qǐng)你以 “We should express opinions on our teachers in a right way” 為主題,寫一篇報(bào)道介紹這次討論的情況以及你的觀點(diǎn)�！�

多數(shù)學(xué)生認(rèn)為是錯(cuò)誤的	他們的理由：1.老師永遠(yuǎn)值得尊重 2.背地里說壞話是卑鄙的 3.學(xué)生應(yīng)坦誠(chéng)跟老師交流
少數(shù)學(xué)生認(rèn)為是恰當(dāng)?shù)?br />	他們的理由：1.可安全、自由地表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn) 2.當(dāng)面說會(huì)讓老師難堪的
你的觀點(diǎn)	？

注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；   
2.參考詞匯：貼吧 post bar,  卑鄙的mean(adj.) ,  難堪的embarrassed (adj.)      
背地里behind one’s back/privately

Answer 1

We should express opinions on our teachers in a right way
Last week there was a heated discussion about whether we should express freely our opinions on our teachers in our school’s post bar. Different students have various opinions on it. Here are their words:
A majority of the students think that the teachers must be worth respecting permanently. Besides, it is mean that one person make any irresponsible comments behind on others, especially our loved teachers. As a senior student, we should learn how to make a deep communication with our teachers when we have any dissatisfaction to our teachers.
There is no denying that some students have different opinions and their behaviors. They think that only in this way can they express their real thought and feelings freely and safely. On the other hand, if a student makes much complaint to teachers face to face, it will bring much embarrass to our teachers. 
In my opinion, we shouldn’t stab our teacher in the back; we should be honest to exchange our inside words with our teachers, which can make the two sides of us beneficial.

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)為正反方議論文。討論有些學(xué)生在學(xué)校貼吧上發(fā)表對(duì)老師不滿的言語的行為，要寫出認(rèn)為是錯(cuò)誤的觀點(diǎn)和認(rèn)為是恰當(dāng)?shù)挠^點(diǎn)，及自己的觀點(diǎn)，文章結(jié)構(gòu)為：?引入句→②正方觀點(diǎn)闡述→?反方觀點(diǎn)闡述→④自己的觀點(diǎn)，論述兩種不同觀點(diǎn)主要是結(jié)合要點(diǎn)寫，要注意遣詞造句，自己的看法沒有要點(diǎn)要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。要求學(xué)生有很好的英語思維能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：正反方議論文結(jié)構(gòu)典型，要記住基本結(jié)構(gòu)，另外多記憶一些模板句。寫作時(shí)可以套用一些固定格式，但里面的內(nèi)容句式要富于變化，層次清晰，語句連貫。