Question

閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文.
In China, with one or two parents going out to earn money, many children are left in their hometown in the countryside. These children are called “l(fā)eftover children”. A large number of leftover children have emerged since 1978, and the statistics showed in 2004, the total is 22 million.
Usually their grandparents or their parents’ friends or relatives look after these leftover children. Sometimes they are brought up by one of their parents at home. In most cases, their guardians are not quite educed. To them, making sure that the children are healthy and fed well is the most important task, and that the children are safe and sound is considered to have done a good job. But they seldom care about children’s study, their psychological needs, or mental demands. Neither do they spend some time teaching kids how to develop good habits.
Therefore ,for most of the time, the leftover children can’t get emotional support from their parents, which can result in so many problems.
寫作內(nèi)容
1、以約30個詞概括上文的內(nèi)容
2、然后以約120詞就 “如何關(guān)心農(nóng)村留守兒童（leftover children）的成長？”這個話題發(fā)表你的看法,并包括以下要點:
（1）農(nóng)村留守兒童存在的原因是什么？
（2）你認為他們面臨的最大困難是什么？
（3）解決留守孩子問題的關(guān)鍵是什么？
（4）提出解決問題的措施。
寫作要求
1、你可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2、題目自定。

Answer 1

Show More Concern about the leftover Children
The passage points out a worrying phenomenon in China that the leftover children living in the countryside have lacked their parent’s love because their parents have gone to make a fortune in cities.
As we all know, people living in the countryside have to work far away from their family to earn more money in order to create better living conditions for their children. However, the children have been separated from their parents and live with  their grandparents or relatives, who are not so educated. So their sudy, their mental and psychological demands can’t be drawn attention too. In that case, it’s easy for them to get into bad habits, which can’t be corrected in time. What’s worse, the lack of parents’ love may make them feel lonely.
In my opinion, the key to solving the problem is to have love shinning over them. Parents should keep in touch with them now and then, and be concerned about their psychological demands.

試題分析：本文屬于半開放性的作文，只是給出了大綱，要求考生根據(jù)文字的提示，自行組織要點。留守兒童的原因在于地方經(jīng)濟不夠發(fā)達，父母外出打工無法照顧孩子，只好放在老家。留守兒童最大的困難在于教育，解決此類問題的關(guān)鍵在于地方政府和教育部門要有措施，要讓留守兒童養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)和生活習(xí)慣。
點評：本文對于考生的謀篇布局的能力要求較高，要求考生自行組織要點，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。