Question

上星期一下午你在圖書館排隊(duì)借書時(shí)有一位男生插隊(duì)，你對(duì)其進(jìn)行勸說和制止，從而引起爭(zhēng)吵。后來有一位教師來解決這件事。現(xiàn)在你向你們的外籍教師用英語陳述這件事情的經(jīng)過。內(nèi)容主要包括如下幾點(diǎn)：1. 事情經(jīng)過；2. 你的觀點(diǎn)和呼吁。
詞數(shù)：120左右。

Answer 1

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On the afternoon of last Monday, I went to the school library to borrow some books. There were so many students there that I had to wait in line. Suddenly a boy student pushed his way( jumped the queue) in front of me. So I told him he should wait at the end of the queue for his turn. But he didn’t listen to me and even said some rude words. I was so angry that we began to quarrel with each other. Soon the teacher on duty came and asked the reason. Then the student was asked to go out of the queue and wait for his turn. At last, he apologized to me and went away.
I think every student should follow the school rules and I want to appeal to all the students to obey the public rules.

試題分析：
本題是一篇給材料作文，材料是考生熟悉的東西，考生不難理解寫作的目的和要求，文章的題目已給出�？忌�重點(diǎn)應(yīng)認(rèn)真審題，審題包括幾個(gè)方面:1.文章的時(shí)態(tài)2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的把握準(zhǔn)確到位。3.考生要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。
4.考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。