Question

假如你是李華，在十一旅游期間入住北京友誼賓館301房間，10月2日入住，6日退房。你回家后發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)中等大小的藍(lán)色背包遺失在那里，內(nèi)有幾本參考書(shū)籍，一個(gè)白色限量版ipod,一張信用卡和少量現(xiàn)金。請(qǐng)用英文給該賓館外籍經(jīng)理寫(xiě)一封信，請(qǐng)他幫忙尋找并寄回。
信件要點(diǎn)包括：1.陳述寫(xiě)信原因；
2.簡(jiǎn)要描述該背包；
3.說(shuō)明其重要性；
4.期待回復(fù)并感謝。
注意：1.150詞左右；
2.信件格式已給出。
Dear Sir,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir，
I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay in Beijing for a tour, but I’m writing to ask a fa-vor to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel.
I checked in on Oct,2 and out on Oct ,6. Setting off in a rush for the station, I left the pack in Room 301. It’s a medium-sized, blue, leather backpack which contains some books that are wanted in reviewing NMET, a white ipod of special edition, a credit card some cash. All in the pack matters to me, especially the ipod, a precious gift from my father on my 18th birthday. So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss.
If you find it, would you please post it to me? The return address is on the envelope.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply and thank you for anything you can do for me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：
作文以寫(xiě)郵件的形式，注意郵件格式，認(rèn)真審題，知道要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，把要點(diǎn)加以整理，用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫瓦M(jìn)行概括；概括時(shí)可以主要用簡(jiǎn)單句，也可以適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句，但要確保復(fù)雜句使用正確；切記要點(diǎn)要全，不要遺漏；注意語(yǔ)法正確，單詞拼寫(xiě)正確，字體干凈。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：要認(rèn)真審題，用正確的語(yǔ)言表示。切記要點(diǎn)要全，不要遺漏；注意語(yǔ)法正確，單詞拼寫(xiě)正確，字體干凈。