Question

假定你是李明， 2012年國慶長假期間，你與同學(xué)結(jié)伴前往韓國觀光旅游。在此期間，導(dǎo)游樸靜女士對你們的行程作了周密安排，給大家無微不至的照顧。回國后，你用英語給樸靜女士寫一封信，表示感謝，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 幫助我們了解韓國歷史和文化，帶領(lǐng)大家參觀名勝古跡，如：大長今的拍攝地；
2. 充當(dāng)購物向?qū)�，向我們介紹聞名的韓國化妝品和高麗人參；
3. 在濟(jì)州島，我的行李不慎丟失，導(dǎo)游幫忙找回；
4. 有機(jī)會歡迎來貴州玩，順便幫忙帶一個我最渴望擁有的韓版Galaxy 3（手機(jī)）。
要求：1.120個詞左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3.參考詞匯: Dae Jang Genm大長今；filming location 拍攝地；cosmetics化妝品；   
Korean ginseng 高麗人參；Jizhou Island濟(jì)州島；
Dear Miss Piao,
Many thanks for your arrangement and care during our stay in Korea!
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Yours truly
Li Ming
Li Hua

Answer 1

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Dear Miss Piao,
Many thanks for your arrangement and care during our stay in Korea!
How time flies! It’s been almost three months since we spent time together in Korea. And I’m writing to show my gratitude for your providing us with such an unforgettable experience, letting us have a rough knowledge of Korean history and culture as well as visit some places of interest there, among them a filming location of the famous TV play Dae Jang Genm included.
Later on the second day, under your guidance, we had a great time doing some shopping in Seoul, during which time you introduced us some famous cosmetics and the Korean ginsengs. Besides, I’d like to say “thanks a billion” again for helping me to get my missing baggage back while we were lost in the scenic spots of Jizhou Island.
Should you get a chance some day, welcome to make a trip to Guizhou. And, in turn, I'll be more than happy to be your guide! By the way, I’d appreciate it if you could bring me a Korean Galaxy III, one I have eagerly awaited for ages！
Best regards！
Yours truly

試題分析：這是一篇以寫信形式的作文，注意信的格式，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
點(diǎn)評：一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。