Question

高中生活是人一生中最美好的時(shí)光，除了學(xué)業(yè)之外，我們還經(jīng)歷、感悟了許多。為了在畢業(yè)前不留下遺憾，我們搞好備考復(fù)習(xí)的同時(shí)，是不是還該做點(diǎn)什么？請根據(jù)提示的要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕南敕ā?br />l 向老師表示感謝
l 跟對你有誤解的同學(xué)談一談
l 征求同學(xué)的寶貴意見
l 再為班級做件有意義的事
注意：
1．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．短文的單詞數(shù)：100左右（開頭已給出的單詞不計(jì)入單詞總數(shù)）
High school is regarded as the best time of my life. Besides classes and homework,
 there’s something more that I especially treasure. In order to leave school with no
regrets…________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

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High school is regarded as the best time of my life. Besides classes and homework, there’s something more that I especially treasure. In order to leave school with no regrets, I’ll make the best of my limited time to go over the lessons I’ve learned. At the same time, I’d like to show my gratitude to all the teachers who have given me so much help in the past three years. In addition, it’s necessary for me to have a talk with whoever might have misunderstood me, for I do care about the friendship between us. For the purpose of improving myself, I’ll ask my classmates for some advice which may be of great value to me. Last but not least, doing another good deed for my class is also my plan. With these things done, I will have no regrets in my high school life.

試題分析：這篇作文，要點(diǎn)和開頭已經(jīng)給出。我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多。需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭及要點(diǎn),不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯，句型和語法，使文章顯得更有文采。注意字?jǐn)?shù)，100字左右。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于演講稿類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。