Question

假如你(李華)是一名中學(xué)生，假期中做了一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。在這次活動(dòng)中你認(rèn)識(shí)到水是生命之源，水資源越來越匱乏，傳統(tǒng)的農(nóng)業(yè)灌溉方式對(duì)水資源的浪費(fèi)太大。請(qǐng)你就該問題給人民日?qǐng)?bào)社寫一篇倡議信，建議農(nóng)民使用現(xiàn)代化的澆灌方式，節(jié)約用水，保護(hù)水資源，為子孫后代造福。寫信時(shí)間：2011年5月17日。
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Answer 1

May 17,2011
Dear Editor，
My name is Li Hua.I’m a middle school student.I’m writing this letter to put forward a proposal to make good use of water. As is well known to us all，water is the source of life.Without water there would be no living things.Besides，fresh water is becoming less and less.
But it is a fact that farmers are still watering crops and vegetables using the traditional way.It’s a waste of water to irrigate farm lands in this way.In my opinion farmers play an important role in saving water.I think it would be better for farmers to use modern technology when they use water for farming.Only in this way can we save as much water as possible.I propose that every one of us should try our best to save water，especially the farmers，so that we can leave more fresh water for our young generations.

試題分析：
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1.一開始要表明自己的觀點(diǎn)：使用現(xiàn)代化的澆灌方式，節(jié)約用水，保護(hù)水資源。
2.根據(jù)題目列出的要求陳述理由
3.結(jié)束語要自然
點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于書信類作文，1.考生一定要注意書信的一般格式 2.以第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí)要清晰，不能含糊其辭 3.千萬別忘了書信的結(jié)束語 4.時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主 5.語言要帶有鼓勵(lì)性