Question

假定你是李明，你的外國朋友（Alice）聽說中國的中小學(xué)正在進行課程改革，來信咨詢有關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫封回信，談?wù)?課程改革"實施后你們學(xué)校生活發(fā)生的變化。
課堂教學(xué)課改前：聽講、做筆記，枯燥乏味  課改后：  生動活潑，合作探究，重能力培養(yǎng)
課外活動課改前：做大量習(xí)   課改后： 活動豐富多彩：參與社會實踐，通過圖書館或因特網(wǎng)獲取息.
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100左右．2.可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，但不能逐字逐句翻譯。
3．開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：課改：curriculum reform
Dear Alice，
How nice to hear from you.You want to know what is going on in China.Now I will
tell you something about it.
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear Alice,
How nice to hear from you! You want to know what is going on in schools in China. Now, I will tell you something about it.
In the past, teachers used to speak alone all the time in class, keeping us students busy making notes and leaving us no time to think for ourselves. As a result, what was taught in class was difficult to understand or to remember. The class was so dull that we gradually lost interest. And after school we were required to do a lot of exercises.
Now, curriculum reform has made our school life colorful. We are active in class. In order to train the ability, we often do research and help each other. We have various after – class activities, such as singing, dancing, going to the library or surfing the Internet for various kinds of information. Our school life is getting more and more lively and interesting.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming

試題分析：這是一篇以寫信形式的作文，注意信的格式，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
點評：一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。