Question

假如你叫李青，是雅安市某中學(xué)學(xué)生。最近你校在為一批來自澳大利亞的學(xué)生征詢住宿家庭，你有意申請。請根據(jù)下面提供的信息用英語給校長寫封信，說明你的理由。
申請理由：
1．住房條件: 寬敞、整潔、社區(qū)（community）環(huán)境優(yōu)美。
2．語言優(yōu)勢: 本人擅長英語，父母都是英語教師，不會有交流困難。
3．接待經(jīng)驗: 上個月剛剛接待過兩名新西蘭(New Zealand)學(xué)生
4．游覽安排：陪同參觀著名的名勝古跡
5．其他：……（內(nèi)容自己添加）
注意： 1．文章必須包括所有要點。
2．詞數(shù)：100左右。信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Sir, 
I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the Australian students.
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Answer 1

Sir,   
I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the Australian students.
We have a large and clean house, which lies in a beautiful community in Yaan. What’s more,I am good at English and  my parents are both English teachers.  So I am sure I have no difficulty in communicating with our guests. In addition, last week, we hosted two guests from New Zealand We had great fun with each other and I got much experience as well during their stay. I will show  them around the places of interest in Yaan. They will surely be fascinated by the beautiful scenery of Yaan. Besides, my mother cooks well, so they can have a taste of local food.I am sure they will have a good time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
liqing

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。