Question

人們對有些大城市在節(jié)假日里不允許燃放鞭炮持不同意見。請根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇短文，介紹人們的不同觀點，并表達自己的看法。

贊成的理由	反對的理由	你的看法
1、慶祝節(jié)日的傳統(tǒng)方式 2、展示人們快樂心情 3、可以觀看美麗煙火	1、容易引起火災(zāi) 2、污染環(huán)境 3、損壞視、聽覺，甚至可能使人受傷或致殘，給家庭帶來痛苦	？

注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：煙火fireworks

Answer 1

Now it is not allowed to set of firecrackers in big cities on festivals. Some people are against it. But I am for the idea. Some people think setting off firecrackers is a traditional way to celebrate important festivals, especially the Spring Festival. It can show people’s happiness and the festive mood. And people can enjoy the beautiful scenery of fireworks.
On the other hand, as we all know, setting off firecrackers may cause a lot of trouble, It may bring big fire and air pollution. And it will do harm to people’s eyes and hearing. If firecrackers are not set off correctly they can injure or disable people, which will bring great sorrow to the family.
From these we can see there are more disadvantages, so I approve of not setting firecrackers, and we should seek other ways to show our happiness.

試題分析：考查正反觀點議論文。討論的話題是“節(jié)假日里不允許燃放鞭炮”，有正反兩方面的觀點。要點都給了出來。本文題型是考生非常熟悉的正反觀點類的議論文，在平時的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個人意見時使用第一人稱。本文的要點均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級的詞匯詞組以提升文章的檔次分。
【亮點說明】本文中的詞組和高級句型還是較多的，be against /be for贊同/反對，On the other hand另一方面, set off 燃放，do harm to對…有傷害， approve of 同意，Some people think setting off firecrackers is a traditional way to celebrate important festivals, especially the Spring Festival. 這句話用了賓語從句和動名詞做主語， as we all know, setting off firecrackers may cause a lot of trouble.這句話用了非限制性定語從句。If firecrackers are not set off correctly they can injure or disable people, which will bring great sorrow to the family.這句話用了非限制性定語從句。