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現(xiàn)在正是穿暖花開的好時節(jié)。你校學(xué)生會以“高中學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動”為題，向?qū)W生做調(diào)查。根據(jù)下面所出示的調(diào)查結(jié)果，請你以“Whether Or Not Should Senior Students Go Spring Outing?”為題，寫一篇短文，上交學(xué)生會。
65％的學(xué)生認為                          35％的學(xué)生認為
1.應(yīng)該春游。                            1.不應(yīng)該春游。
2.親近自然呼吸新鮮空氣,有利健康。，       2.期中考試結(jié)果未出，沒心情玩。
3.活動使精神放松,大腦休息, 有利學(xué)習(xí)。    3.春游耽誤時間，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右。    2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫

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In response to the 21st National Water Saving Propaganda Week from May 13th to May 19th, 2012, the Students' Union of our school organized a series of activities with the theme of advocating a low-carbon lifestyle and promoting water saving on campus. To make the movement better known, the Students' Union put up some posters in the students' dormitories and the classroom buildings to call on the whole school to save every drop of water through daily good habits. Some students also visited the waterworks, getting to know how polluted water was made clean. After that, we held class meetings to exchange experience about saving water. Through these activities, we not only have come to learn how to use water resources properly but have also raised our awareness of saving energy.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，首先要認真閱讀題目�，F(xiàn)在正是穿暖花開的好時節(jié)。你校學(xué)生會以“高中學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動”為題，向?qū)W生做調(diào)查。根據(jù)下面所出示的調(diào)查結(jié)果，請你以“Whether Or Not Should Senior Students Go Spring Outing?”為題，寫一篇短文，上交學(xué)生會，可知這是一篇客觀的調(diào)查結(jié)果。需要些的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意題目要求100左右，寫的字數(shù)不要太多，也不能太少。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。