Question

人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的看法。參考詞匯：上當(dāng)受騙to be cheated

贊成的理由	反對(duì)的理由	你的看法
1．廣交朋友 2．可自由表達(dá)思想 3．利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)	1．浪費(fèi)時(shí)間 2．影響學(xué)習(xí) 3．可能上當(dāng)受騙	？

 
On-line friends
Recently ,people have had a heated discussion about whether students should make friends on-line.
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All the best ,
Yours ,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
On-line friend(s)
Recently ,people have had a heated discussion about whether students should make friends on-line. Different people hold different opinions.
Some of them agree with the opinion . The reasons are as follows: first, we can make more friends with others on the Internet. Second, We can express our ideas freely. Besides, making friends on line can contribute to learning English.
However, others are against the opinion .The reason why they disagree is that they think it is a waste of time to make friends on line and has a bad effect on study. What’s more, students are likely to be cheated on line .
Each coin has its two sides .In my opinion, making friends on line is good for us because it is very convenient and can widen our horizon.
All the best ,
Yours，
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇議論文，第一段贊同學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點(diǎn)，第二段是反對(duì)學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友觀點(diǎn)，第三段是表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)。第一段陳述贊同的理由時(shí)作者用了Firstly, Secondly, they can express their feelings Besides,來(lái)連接，是文章有層次，并且很流暢。第二段是反對(duì)的人的觀點(diǎn)和他們的理由，作者沒(méi)有重復(fù)第二段的方法而是用了 in addition來(lái)過(guò)渡。第三段是作者自己的觀點(diǎn)，范文中用In my opinion/ From my point of view來(lái)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，觀點(diǎn)明確，還有自己的令人信服的理由。一篇好的作文要做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，熟練運(yùn)用好的詞組。例如as follows、 a waste of time get cheated、 As for friendship 和widens our eyes and enriches our knowledge.都用了我們學(xué)過(guò)的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)，另外這篇文章里的好句型也是亮點(diǎn)，例如：chatting on line is also helpful for our language study. /They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully/ Only in this way can making online friends be valuable to us.熟練正確的使用這些句型能體現(xiàn)考生的水平，也會(huì)給自己的文章加分。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：這類作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，可以分三段寫(xiě)：贊成；反對(duì)；你的看法。注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，熟練運(yùn)用好的詞組。