Question

近來，“光盤行動”悄然流行，這一行動提倡崇尚節(jié)約，反對浪費的社會風(fēng)氣。其實在我們的校園生活中也存在一些浪費現(xiàn)象。請簡述幾個浪費現(xiàn)象，并就如何厲行節(jié)約、
反對浪費，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。
注意：1. 文中不得透露個人的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
2. 詞數(shù)為100字左右。(開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù))。
3.“光盤行動”“clear your plate” campaign

Answer 1

Recently, “clear your plate” campaign is more and more popular in society, which advocates saving against wasting. The campaign draws our attention to wasting on campus. Some students are noticed to throw away a lot of food in the canteen. As is often the case, some lights are still on with nobody in classrooms. What’s more, many a student spends much money buying unnecessary items.
As far as I’m concerned, it’s high time that we fought against wasting. Here’re my suggestions. Firstly, I think our school should carry out various activities to arouse students’ awareness of saving. Secondly, relevant rules and regulations are supposed to be made to punish those who waste things. Most importantly, we should form the habit of saving from now. It is everybody’s duty to save resources.

試題分析：考察半開放性短文寫作。本文講述的是“光盤行動”，是針對社會中的浪費現(xiàn)象�？梢詮氖程美锏睦速M現(xiàn)象談起，小店里的食品浪費等等展開說明。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。
點評：半開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。