Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示，并結(jié)合你校園生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。
The power of praise is great. Praise can help people build their confidence and go through ups and downs.
注意：①無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
④詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

From my point of view, with praise from others, we will overcome any obstacles on the way to success.
Few months ago, I was depressed because of my failure in a series of tests. Therefore, absorbed in my negative mood, I didn’t pay much attention to study. My teacher found my abnormal behavior and had a talk with me. I had thought he would criticize me, but he didn’t. He just said, “You are such a clever and hardworking boy. I believe you won’t let people around you down.” It was his praise that inspired me with confidence and made me realized that I shouldn’t give up. From then on, I studied harder than before and got good marks at length.
Praise is the best virtue. Only with praise can we have the confidence to defeat problems and move forward.

試題分析：本文寫作的話題是表?yè)P(yáng)的力量。接受了別人的表?yè)P(yáng)，可以讓我們有信心來(lái)克服生活指的困難，走向成功�？忌�可以用自己生活中的具體的事例來(lái)證明這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的正確性，既可以是自己的例子也可以是身邊人的例子。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：開(kāi)放性作文只給出了一個(gè)話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。