Question

假如你是Jack，你的中國(guó)朋友李芳打算出國(guó)留學(xué)。請(qǐng)你幫她分析一下出國(guó)留學(xué)的利弊，并且給出幾點(diǎn)建議。
要點(diǎn)如下：
利：1.開拓視野
2.豐富人生
3.學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立
4.有助于語(yǔ)言和文化的學(xué)習(xí)
弊：1.費(fèi)用過(guò)高
2.語(yǔ)言障礙
3.文化差異
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2. 涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
Dear Li Fang,
I’m writing to you to share my opinions with you on studying abroad.
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
 
Yours,
Jack

Answer 1

Dear Li Fang,
I’m writing to you to share my opinions with you on studying abroad.
Attending schools abroad has many advantages. In the first place, we can widen our vision and broaden our minds. Second, while studying in a foreign country, we can travel widely, visiting famous scenic spots and making friends with the local people. Thirdly, we can use the foreign language in our daily life so that our proficiency in the language may be improved quickly.
However, as everything has two sides, there are also some disadvantages in attending a foreign university. The most serious problem is the language barrier. Most of the students who are ready to go abroad do not have adequate proficiency in the language spoken there. As a result, on arriving there, they will find it difficult to understand what the instructors are saying, Besides, due to lack of knowledge of the customs and ways of life of the local people, they may run into trouble in dealing with various situations. Therefore, misunderstandings often arise. Furthermore, the cost of living is much higher than that in your country.
Therefore, given an opportunity to attend a school abroad, one must consider both sides of the factors carefully before making up his mind. On the whole, it is a good thing to go and study abroad, particularly when the subject is very weak or not available in your country. I hope my suggestions will help you make a good decision.
Yours,
Jack       

試題分析：考察正反觀點(diǎn)類議論文寫作。本文討論的話題是出國(guó)留學(xué)的利弊；要點(diǎn)在文章中都給了出來(lái)�？忌�可以在個(gè)人意見部分做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，建議對(duì)方仔細(xì)考慮利弊，從自身實(shí)際出發(fā)。最后可以建議對(duì)方出國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)，并與中國(guó)的國(guó)內(nèi)文化相結(jié)合。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文題型是考生非常熟悉的正反觀點(diǎn)類的議論文，在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個(gè)人意見時(shí)使用第一人稱。本文的要點(diǎn)均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點(diǎn)聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級(jí)的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當(dāng)使用一至兩句諺語(yǔ)如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。